So my intuition about error message 'line 1 position 11' was correct ?
I just checked my messages from the original problem, and the guy says
'I watched your video and I tried the file. Alas, it doesn't seem to work for me when I loaded it up and put the two object references into the boxes, I move the slider but nothing happens I'm afraid.
I'm using R16 at home, I don't know if that's why... I'll try again when I get to work tomorrow, where we have R20 '
It seems it was a R16 problem.
I think we have been very fortunate in the past with C4D backwards compatibility. There's some changes with R20, but MAXON seem to try to keep problems to a minimum eg I recently fixed an old floor generator for a Cafe member to make it work in R20 - the only R20 difference was a couple of cloner ports had changed slightly.
So the big question is - can I assume any Python scenes are OK to share back to R17 ?
BTW, thanks for looking into this - hex editors are a bit beyond me...