I think that's very nice ! :) But if you're not asking a question we should put it in the WiPs / Final Renders section. I'll do that for you.
Looks like a good model. The internals look particularly decent, but for me I could do with less blowing out on the Drive Bay racks at the top right there... Also, and this is just a personal preference thing so feel free to ignore me, but I'd change that frontal yellow light to something cooler and bluer, just to more nicely focus the eye on, and contrast with the red...
CBR