Hello, and welcome to all... this :)
Your apples are very well textured, and the machine they are in is pleasingly rendered. If I did have a criticism, it would be the obvious one, that C4D can't really do liquids without plugins, so your apple juice looks predictably like ice when it transforms to 'liquid'. But you have done quite well within that limitation. Also if it was me, I would get out at the end faster - less coloured logo cards, and less time spent on them. Otherwise - it's a pretty decent job - well done !
CBR