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By rasputin

Human figure is a posed Daz3D model; the dress I did in Marvelous Designer, all else modeled and textured within C4D. Corona 6 Render: 42 passes.

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Rasputin's Gallery III

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Guest Igor
1 hour ago, rasputin said:

Thanks so much.   I wish I had your amazing skill at caricature!

Well, you can have it, you just need put time and effort toward it. :cowboypistol:

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hvanderwegen

Nothing wrong with the figure, but the composition needs more work in my opinion. Be careful of those visual tangents: they're everywhere.

 

And the overall composition could use some work. Centered straight standing looks somewhat static. Wrists are cut off by the straight lines of the object in the background. Background lighting and overall lighting could be much more dramatic for visual interest.

 

I would push the composition much further, because I feel it doesn't do justice to your character and clothing, which are good!

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rasputin

Thank you so much,  HV,  for your comments.   They are well-taken.  What are "visual tangents",  please?

I had been inspired by this 1930's Hollywood image:

letty lynton.jpg

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